discard: (War....war never changes)
you can't spell "alone" without "leon" ([personal profile] discard) wrote 2016-04-15 07:04 pm (UTC)

[correct.

But Leon just arches an eyebrow at that, before shaking his head in exasperation and turning his attention back to the food.]


The situation has been poorly explained from the beginning. For what purpose are they fighting over these things? Why was she in this situation to begin with, and how did she get from the previous scene to here? There was no indication that she should have been able to travel that far to begin with.

As for the protagonist, his story is entirely full of holes.

[Leon stop ruining everything you touch.]

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